Noisy
As I look at my tiny oasis of jade - my backyard garden, I can see a stream of visitors that come and go with the flowing seasons. This time, I wanted to write about the noisy miner, a small native bird belonging to the honeyeater family, more reminiscent of the myna or starlings that are so common back home. The miner, justifying its name, becomes pretty noisy and territorial in nesting season, attacking every visitor. With this theme, I composed, not one but two poems over back-to-back days, trying to experiment with style and depth. The theme remains the same, that of my learning from the tiny bird. However, the first is more rhythmic, focusing on the play of syllables and rhymes, creating almost a ballad-style poem, with quatrains and a sing-song consistently rhythmic ABCB pattern. In contrast, with the second one, I worked on a blank verse: with unyoking of the need for meters and rhythms, I felt freer to focus on the words and with it a bit of depth. No more rhythm, ju...